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Write an instant message to a friend. Read Jenny's instant message below and write a reply to her. Start your instant message like this:


Hi Jenny,
Sorry to hear about your problem.

Comments

  1. Hi Jenny
    Sorry to hear about your problem.I think what you should do is take their trust by showing a positive attitude towards the use of mobile phones. After that you can use your own savings without wasting parental money.You will feel more meaningful and more affectionate for mobile phones.I think that is my advice for you.I hope your parents allow it.Bye see you next time.
    Sincerely
    Dania

    Nur Dania Binti Misnan 205

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  2. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem. I've had this problem before but in the end they bought it too. I told them about the benefits oh having a phone. I also promised them that I would use it only after I completed my school work . I hope this help you.
    Good luck !
    Farah

    Nur Farah Bt Samlan

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  3. Hi Jenny,

    Sorry about that.

    I think you should tell your parents that you are going to start saving your pocket money to buy a mobile phone.If you tell your parent like that, then they will see your effort to buy a mobile phone and give you a permission to buy it.I hope you will get a permission to buy a mobile phone.

    Hana

    Muhd Syahmi B Mohd Nazri
    205

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  4. Hi jenny,
    Sorry to hear about the problem.I think what you have to do is study hard. It is because your parent can give some presents to appreciate your results. So,you can try to persuade them by showing some advatages that will be usefull for you such as you can search some info that you don't know in internet. I hope this advice may help you. Bye
    Arina

    Arina hazwani bt muhammad ali 205

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  5. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem. I'm sorry to say it but you need to know, that our parents isn't rich. They work hard,in the morning and also at the night,to get money to support us. A mobile phone is not a thing that we must have in our age, so I think it is not necessary. But, if you still want to buy it, I think you should use your own money to buy it. You can get some money by doing part time job or doing chores. Then, when you already have enough money, you can go to buy your own mobile phone with your own money! Your parents would be proud of you if you buy your mobile phone using your own money. I think that's all I can advice, hope this advice could help you, got to go, bye!



    Muhammad Azri Haziq bin Mohd Zamzuri 205

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  6. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem. Maybe that's a reason why your parents won't let you buy a new mobile phone. Firstly, you should save some money. You can use the money in the future when your parents let's you buy a mobile phone. After that, you must showing that you are ready to have mobile phone by showing their a good attitude. Example , you should have a good result in examination.
    That's all from me. Bye.

    Muhammad Nur Dinie bin Adzli 205

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  7. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem . I think you should take convince them that you will use the smart phone for your study . It's because they will never give you a smart phone for nothing, they will always want a good things for you . So you need to convice them that you can study with smart phone . I hope this advice can help you to buy a smart phone.

    Eidlan Hakimie Bin Yusnaidi Sham
    205

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  8. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem.I think what you have to do is take their trust on you by showing them the advantages of using smartphones.Other than that,you can buy the smartphone using your own money from your saving without using your parent money.With that you will more appreciate the smartphone.That's only my advice for you.I hope your parent allow you to buy it.Goodluck!
    Khadijah

    Nurkhadijah Qurratu'aini Binti Sariful Anuar
    205

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  9. Hi Jenny
    Sorry to har about yor problem.I think yor parent do all of this for your own good.It is because having a smartphone can make you be such a lazy person.Beside that,I think they don't waste their money for something that you can live without such as smartphone.So that's all from me.Forgive me if my advice hurts you.Goodbye!

    Aminuddin Bin Pauzi
    Class:205

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  10. Hi Jenny,
    Sorry to hear about your problem. I think you should study hard and do good in your examination. When you get a good result, maybe your parents will give a permission to buy the smartphone. Other, you can save some money to buy the smartphone. I hope from my advice can help to solve your problem. That's all. Bye!

    Nur Zulaikha Humaira bt Johari
    205

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